Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假定你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。
I’m the mother of a sixteen-year-old , I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another She has been doing very well in school , but some friends of mine keep telling me that 1 put too much pressure on her Am 1 wrong?
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1、表明自己的看法；
2、陳述自己的理由（可舉例說明）
3、提出至少兩條建議。
要求：
1、短文須寫在指定區(qū)域。
2、短文詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）
3、內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。
4、書寫須清晰、工整。
Hi , TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.

Answer 1

Hi , TigerMom,
What puzzles you is netually a puzzle for many parents in China .  In my opinion , what you think and what you do are not suitable.
Although high grades are important in assessing students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom ,emotion, health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us . Some top students in school have turned out not to be as sueeessfus in society as they are expccted . The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Besider , punishment is by no means a wise choiee to
help them grow up mentally and physieally.
So I suggest that you take your friends ’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl , let her have more friends and soeial activities ,and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

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