Question

酒駕是一個談論很久的話題。酒駕釀成的悲劇一直在發生， 盡管國家出臺了嚴厲的法規， 但是依舊屢禁不止。前有高曉松，近有王志文，這些名人大腕們都沒能避免。假設你是李華，請你針對酒駕這一現象，給報社寫一篇英文書信， 并談談你的看法。

1. 詞數；100詞左右，  2. 可適當增加細節，使行文連貫，通順。

3. 參考詞匯；酒駕， drunk driving

Dear Sir,

Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently,

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently, even some famous persons like Gao Xiaosong and Wang Zhiwen involved in.

I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary. For one thing, bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth. If someone drives after drinking, it is a great danger to all the others. For another, bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves. As we all know, many drivers lose their lives because of drunk driving every year, which also makes their family into great trouble.

Thus, in my opinion, anyone mustn’t drive after drinking wine, let alone drunk driving. Remember: never drive your car after drinking and drive without drinking forever.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于議論文文體，議論文的文章首先要對文章所表達核心主旨進行把握好，不要跑題。對于本文的寫作首先表明自己明確的觀點，反對酒駕I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary.然后從兩個方面進行闡述一是酒駕的禁令幫助保護別人的安全和健康bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth.另一方面也保護著司機本人bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves.最后對自己的觀點進行總結，提出自己的忠告never drive your car after drinking.

考點：提綱類寫作

點評：書面表達是最能體現一個學生的語言運用能力和英語思維理解的題目，議論文的寫作相對比較容易，對于表達內容層次時需要使用平時積累的層次關系的短語，多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩步的提升。