Question

你是李華，最近看到一則關于移居（immigrate to）加拿大的廣告。你去信加拿大駐華使館移民處了解具體的信息。要點如下：
如何成為加拿大公民？需要多長時間才能申請成功？
如果移民成功，能否憑國內的高中文憑直接上大學？如果不行，又有什么要求？
平均學費（tuition）、生活費（living expenses）以及獎學金信息。
注意：1.詞數120字左右
2.適當增加細節，以使行文連貫
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Chinese high school student. I am writing to ask fo more information concerning immigration to Canada.________________________________________
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Yours faithfully
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear sir and madam，
I am a Chinese high school student. I am writing to ask for more information concerning immigration to Canada. I have read a recent advertisement that asked people to considering immigrating to Canada. I’m very interested in it, but I want some detailed information.
Firstly, I would like to know how one is able to become a Canada citizen, and how soon this could be achieved.
Secondly, as I am going to get the high school diploma in China， I wonder if I can go to university directly in Canada, provided that I get accepted. If not, what qualifications do I need to go to university?
Finally, I would like to know the average tuition and living expenses each year. Could you tell me something about the scholarships the government and universities offer to students.
I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。