Question

6．假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改．
         增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符合（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
         修改：在錯的詞下劃-橫線，并在該下面寫出修改后的詞．
         注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US．which was
very interested．One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door
come by to help．As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be
sold he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees．On the box was a card
Say："25 cents each..""You will never sell these for that much．"he told Nick．
Convinced，Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece．Without a moment's
delay，my neighbor pricked up the box but announceed："I'll take the m．"

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要敘述了我的朋友跟我講了他在美國過程中的有趣經歷．

解答 My friend Nick told me∧story about his experience back in the US．which was
                                    a
veryinterested．One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door
     interesting
comeby to help．As the old man looked over the thingsonthe yardthat were to be
came                                                                         in 或   ground
sold he stopped at a box of goldenballfor Christmas trees．On the box was a card
                                                 balls
Say："25 cents each..""You will never sell these for that much．"he told Nick．
Saying
Convinced，Nick has brought the price upto 10 cents a piece．Without a moment's
                                                         down
delay，myneighbor pricked up the box but announceed："I'll take the m．"
           his
1．story前加不定冠詞a   考查冠詞．因為單數可數名詞一般不單獨使用，表示一個，故加a．
2．that-which    考查定語從句的關系詞．  此處是非限制性定語從句，故that改為which．
3．interested-interesting  考查形容詞．     從句的主語是which，應用interesting"令人感興趣的"作表語．
4．come-came  考查時態．   整篇文章都用的是過去時，故come改為came．
5．on-in 或yard-ground   考查介詞搭配．
6．ball-balls，考查名詞單復數．  a box of+可數名詞復數形式，故ball改為balls．
7．say-saying，考查非謂語動詞．     saying作定語，修飾card．
8．up-down  考查副詞． 根據上下文，此處應是降價，故up改為down．
9．my-his   考查人稱代詞．根據前文此處應是his．
10．but-and 考查連詞．   but前后的動詞是并列關系，故but改為and．

點評 本篇短文改錯考查冠詞，非謂語動詞，名詞單復數，時態等，平時注重多積累，答題時結合句意和語法進行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯．