Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，提到他上周作為交換生來(lái)到北京的一所學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，但一時(shí)交不到朋友，為此很苦惱。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回信，提一些建議。要點(diǎn)包括:

1. 相信自己；

2. 樂(lè)于助人；

3. 參加活動(dòng)......。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am glad to receive your letter, but I am sorry to hear you’re having trouble in making new friends in your new school.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice.

Firstly, believe in yourself, smile and be friendly, because smiling is an open invitation to others.Secondly, why not take an active part in all the activities ? You can look for people with the same interest as you, whom you are likely to get along with and share your happiness.Lastly, it is a good idea to help others when necessary. If you are always ready to help others, they will understand you better.

I do hope my advice is of much help. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信：假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，提到他上周作為交換生來(lái)到北京的一所學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，但一時(shí)交不到朋友，為此很苦惱。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回信，提一些建議。要點(diǎn)包括:1. 相信自己；2. 樂(lè)于助人；3. 參加活動(dòng)......。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：having trouble in making new friends（在交新朋友上有煩惱）；offer you some advice（提供給你一些建議）；an open invitation to others（對(duì)他人的公開邀請(qǐng)）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。