Question

5．假定你是李華，你校外籍教師Miss Rose常常在課余時間輔導你英語口語，使你在上周學校舉行的英語演講比賽中榮獲第一名．為此，你決定寫一封感謝信，對Miss Rose的幫助表示真誠的感謝．
注意：1．文章包括上述內容，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數100左右；
3．信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數．
Dear Miss Rose，
I am writing to you
to tell you a piece of good news．Last week our school held a Spoken English Competition．I stood out in the competition and won the first place．In my view，all the achievement that I have gained is owed to your help（高分句型一）．During your spare time，you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress．During the competition，I followed your advice on how to behave and how to keep a good state，which led to my success．I'm grateful for your help．Without your help，I couldn't have won such a prize．I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress（高分句型二）．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
During your spare time，you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress．
空閑的時候，你經常幫助我的英語口語，我取得了快速進展的時間
高分句型二：
Without your help，I couldn't have won such a prize．I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress．
如果沒有你的幫助，我不可能取得這樣的獎．我決定，我會更努力的嘗試進一步的進展．

解答 MicrosoftInternetExplorer402DocumentNotSpecified7.8 磅Normal0Dear Miss Rose，
     I am writing to you  to tell you a piece of good news．Last week our school held a Spoken English Competition．I stood out in the competition and won the first place．In my view，all the achievement that I have gained is owed to your help（高分句型一）．During your spare time，you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress．During the competition，I followed your advice on how to behave and how to keep a good state，which led to my success．I'm grateful for your help．Without your help，I couldn't have won such a prize．I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress（高分句型二）．
   I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．