Question

【題目】請根據下面的提示，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。

提示：時下，越來越多的學生使用的是電子詞典，而非紙質詞典。請根據下表就此現象的利弊做出剖析，并提出自己的看法。

利	1.方便、快捷； 2．提供讀音； 3．附帶其他功能，如計算器。
弊	1.對眼睛有害，影響視力； 2．電子產品對環境的污染更大。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays more and more students prefer electric dictionaries in their language learning.Generally，edictionaries have many advantages.First，it is more convenient and faster.Besides，with an edictionary the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation.Thirdly，an edictionary usually has other functions，for example，it may be used as a calculator.

But every coin has two sides.It also has some disadvantages.The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.To make matters worse，edictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries.

As for me，I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary，which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇提綱類作文。文章采用三段式，語句嚴謹，結構布局合理，文中使用高級句子。with an edictionary the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation.句中使用含情態動詞的被動語態；The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.句中that引導表語從句；I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary，which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.非限制性定語從句和比較級完美結合；另外，Generally，Besides，Thirdly，for example，To make matters worse，As for me，等的運用為文章增色添彩。