Question

15．假設你是新華中學的學生會主席．近來，隨著網絡的普及，學生的漢字書寫能力降低．為了保護傳統民族文化--漢字，校學生會提出倡議．請你根據以下內容提示，為學校《英語沙龍》的同學們寫一封倡議書．
內容要點：1．少上網，多讀書、勤記筆記；
2．養成練書寫和寫日記的習慣；
3．自擬一項其他方面的倡議內容．
注意：短文字數不少于100詞．參考詞匯：漢字Chinese characters
Dear friends，
In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，our handwriting is not so good as it was in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）We'd better form the habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping diaries every day．Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
Let's take action now!
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇寫作要求我們寫倡議書，首先注意語氣和倡議書的格式，其實作文結構可分為以下幾部分：①由于網絡的普及，我們疏忽了我們的傳統漢字．為了保護我們的漢字文化，提出幾點建議．②少上網，多讀書看報，經常練習書法和寫作；③嘗試給朋友親筆寫信；④從現在做起，關注我們的中華文化．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：As a result結果；so good as 和…一樣好；In order to以便，為了；form the habit of形成…的習慣；Besides另外；As the saying goes正如諺語所說；pay more attention to多加關注；
In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）
Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear friends，
      In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，our handwriting is not so good as it was in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
     We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）We'd better form the habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping diaries every day．Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
      Let's take action now!
                                                                                                                                                                                         Students'Union

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．