Question

一年一度的校園文化節(jié)又拉開了序幕，但今年學生卻沒有表現出像往年的興趣和熱情。面對這一現象，有人提出校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦的問題，這引起了同學們的討論。上周末你班也進行了一場討論。請你根據下面表格所提供的內容將討論結果做一總結并發(fā)表自己的觀點，字數120左右。

	觀點
支持	給學生創(chuàng)造了展示自我才華的舞臺；有利于提高學習興趣； 豐富校園文化，活躍校園氣氛。
反對	學習任務重，抽不出時間； 許多活動和學習無關，沒有多大意義。
你的看法	……

注意：1. 行文連貫，內容完整；2. 題目和開頭語已給出，不計入總詞數； 3. 總詞數120左右。

To be continued or not?

The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again.____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Some students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents. Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a serious of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active. However, some students hold different views. They emphasize that they have been kept busy with their study and have no time to spare for the activities of the campus cultural festival. They also state that they cannot benefit much from some activities, which, in their opinion, have little to do with their study.

From my opinion of view, holding the campus cultural festival is a must. On the one hand, more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions. On the other hand, students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據表格提示，將“校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦”這一話題的討論結果總結一下，并給出自己的觀點。作文可以分為三部分，支持者的觀點；反對者的觀點；自己的看法。寫作時注意時態(tài)、人稱、拼寫和標點的正確使用。

【亮點說明】范文使用了較多的賓語從句，如believe that..., emphasize that..., state that...等；

范文使用了較多的短語，如offer... for sb, Apart from, a serious of, been kept busy with, benefit from, From my opinion of view, find it a good chance to relax, as well as等，使作文變得充實；

范文注意使用Apart from, However, On the one hand, On the other hand等來銜接句子與段落，使作文銜接緊密；

范文還使用了定語從句which, in their opinion, have little to do with their study和which will make them qualified for their future positions及that can’t be found in the book，使作文句式多樣，靈活運用語法知識的能力較強。

范文中的must意為“必不可少的事”。

考點：材料類作文