Question

6．請你改正下面短文中的錯誤．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
      3．請在答題卡上指定的地方作答．
   It was 7：1 5 in the morning of February 8，2015．  I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an elderly man came out of the park on other side of the street．  Then I saw a yellow car drive up Beijing Street and made a right turn into Park Road． The：next moment the car hit the man while he was cross the road．  He fell off with a cry． The car didn't stop and drove off with great speed heading west． I noticed that the driver is a young woman and that the plate number was AC864．  About two minutes late I stopped a passing car and took the old men to the nearest hospital．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要是講述了作者看到一起交通事故的經歷．作者正在散步，就在此時一位老人從街道的另一邊走出公園，而當時一輛黃色轎車右轉，接著車撞到了這位老人．但是車沒有停下來，而是快速開走，作者注意了車牌號碼，接著送老人去醫院．

解答 It was 7：1 5 inthe morning of February 8，2015．  I was walking along Park Road towards the east
                    on
while an elderly man came out of the park on∧other side of the street．  Then I saw a yellow car drive up
when                                                         the
Beijing Street and madea right turn into Park Road． The：next moment the car hit the man while he was
                           make
cross the road．  He fell off with a cry． The car didn't stop and drove off with great speed heading west．
crossing                       去掉或改為down                            but
I noticed that the driver isa young woman and that the plate number was AC864．  About two minutes late 
                                  was                                                                                                              later
I stopped a passing car and took the old mento the nearest hospital．
                                                          man
1．in---on   考查介詞搭配．  具體到某一天的早晨，可以使用on．
 2．while---when   考查連詞．   when后面的從句中可以使用延續性動詞也可以使用短暫性動詞．While后面的從句只能使用延續性動詞．這里的come out of…是一個短暫性動詞．故使用when． 
3．other前面加the 考查冠詞． 路的另外一邊是特指，所以用the．
4．made---make   考查動詞形式，這里的make a right turn與前面的drive up是并列關系．
5．cross---crossing  考查謂語動詞形式．  本句中是用的進行時態，所以用現在分詞．
6．去掉off，或改為down，考查副詞，本句中表示他跌倒了，所以可以直接用fall，或fall down．
7．and--but 考查連詞．前后是轉折關系，所以用but．
8．is--was，考查時態．本文講的是過去的事情，所以用一般過去時態．
9．late--later 去掉 考查副詞．  前面 two minutesf后面要用later 作時間狀語．
10．men--man 考查名詞單復數．   前面提到的就是一位老人，所以用單數形式．

點評 本篇短文改錯考查較為細致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數是否一致，時態是否一致．各種詞性之間的區別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用．一般的這類題型不會出現太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎知識較多．平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結構．修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯．