Question

隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，城市交通問題越來越嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

現(xiàn)狀：1. 高峰期交通堵塞，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；

2. 難找到停車的地方，空氣質(zhì)量差。

解決方式：

1. 多建地下停車場，大力發(fā)展公共交通；

2. 增強(qiáng)環(huán)保意識(shí)，使用替代能源。

注意：1. 文章必須包括主要內(nèi)容，過渡自然。  2. 參考詞匯：awareness

3. 詞數(shù)120左右

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

With the development of Chinese economy, the traffic problem in cities is becoming more and more serious.

Firstly, it is very common for people to get stuck in the traffic jam during the rush hour, which is a great waste of time. Also, it is difficult to find a parking place, especially in the center of a city. Furthermore, the air has been seriously polluted because of too many cars.

Luckily, people have come up with some good ideas. More underground parking lots should be built, and the public transport system is to be improved. Meanwhile, we should improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment and use as many alternative energy resources as possible.

In my opinion, the planet earth is not just ours but also the future generations’. I would ride a bicycle rather than drive a car.

【解析】

試題分析：英語寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過程。啟動(dòng)知識(shí)信息儲(chǔ)存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對(duì)語言表達(dá)的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時(shí)態(tài)及語態(tài)的使用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如With the development of Chinese economy, come up with, improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Firstly，Meanwhile， Also, Furthermore, In my opinion等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。