Question

假設你是新華中學的學生李華，不久前在學校舉辦的英語競賽中獲得一等獎。校報請你寫一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學習英語的經驗。請根據以下提示用英語寫一篇短文：

1. 參加英語角的益處；

2. 堅持寫英語日記的作用；

3. 英文閱讀網站（EnjoyReading）對你的幫助。

注意：

1. 詞數：120左右；

2. 可適當增加細節， 以使行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.

In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make more progress. Finally, some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. Through these websites, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. What’s more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process.

All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇說明性文章的寫作，要點已給出，考生根據所給要點進行展開，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，是文章表現比較豐富。

考點：考查語言組織能力。

點評：題目中要點已給出，寫作前一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。