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2．假設你正在參加一場英語演講比賽，你抽到的演講題目是"Time and tide wait for no man"，請你就該話題發表演講．內容包括：
（1）．你對此話題的理解；
（2）．用自己的一個事例闡述說明；
（3）．總結發言．
注意：
（1）．詞數100左右；
（2）．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
（3）．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．

Good afternoon everyone!I'm so glad today to stand here to make this speech．My topic is"Time and tide wait for no man"．Time is valuable and it is a bird forever on the wing．Therefore we should make full use of it．
One year ago，I made acquaintances with some problem students and fellinto bad habits．I didn't want to go to school any longer and started to playtruant．Later，my English teacher found my problem and helped me out of the bigtrouble．How I regret the time I wasted!
Lost time is gone forever and can never be back．I sincerely hope thatevery one of us should have a strong sense of time and make good use of it．．
That's a11．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，根據所提供的材料，寫一篇演講稿，演講題目是"Time and tidewait for no man"．寫作要點包括：對這句話的理解；用自己的一個事例闡述說明；總結發言．寫作時應以一般現在時和一般過去時為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱．重要短語：make thisspeech （發表演講），make fulluse of（充分利用），make acquaintances with （熟悉），fall into bad habits（養成壞習慣），help sb out of …（幫某人擺脫…），have a strongsense of time （強烈的時間觀念）．

解答 Good afternoon everyone!I'm so glad to stand here tomake this speech．My topic is"Time and tide wait for no man"．Time is valuableand it is a bird forever on the wing．【高分句型】Therefore we should make full use of it．（對這句話的理解）
      One year ago，I made acquaintances with some problem students and fellinto bad habits．I didn't want to go to school any longer and started to playtruant．Later，my English teacher found my problem and helped me out of the bigtrouble．How I regret the time I wasted!（用自己的一個事例闡述說明）
     Lost time is gone forever and can never be back．I sincerely hope thatevery one of us should have a strong sense of time and make good use of it．【高分句型】（總結發言）
    That's all．Thank you for attention．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．