Question

書面表達（滿分20分）

請你根據(jù)自己的感受，寫一篇題為“Why Smile is Important” 的短文。短文應(yīng)包括以下要點：

1.微笑是普遍使用的面部表情——它的作用是快樂和使人平靜。

2.微笑說明你友善，使人們樂于跟你在一起。

3.微笑使人忘卻煩惱，減輕壓力。它能改變你的情緒。

4.微笑使人精神高漲，有益身心健康。

5.……

要求: 1.除包括以上要點外，要適當增加自己的觀點。

2.詞數(shù)120左右。

The world always looks beautiful if you are smiling.                         

                                                                   

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

The world always looks beautiful if you are smiling. Your life will  be more beautiful because of your smile. As we all know, everyone recognizes smile wherever they come from. Besides, there are more reasons for why smile is so important for us.

First of all, smile is the most universal facial expression—its function is to show happiness and put people at ease. Secondly, smile is a symbol of your kindness to others. Smile can make you more attractive and people will never feel dull with you. Thirdly, smiling can reduces stress and help change your mood in a silent way. What’s more, it can help you prevent you from looking upset. Last but not least, smiling can keep you in high spirits, which will do you good both mentally and physically.

In all, smile is very important. Let’s be happy and smile every day!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數(shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點：提綱作文

點評：本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。