Question

假如你是李華，美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給他寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：

l.表示贊成；

2.提出你喜歡的欄目；

3.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好；

3. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

4. 參考詞匯?欄目—column 。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely  agree with you on that.  Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives  us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s  necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good  for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!  Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述的時(shí)候要按照要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章更連貫，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.和 it’s  necessary to learn from each other.都是亮點(diǎn)。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。