Question

16．假定你是李華，今年高考結束后，你打算和同學們為某貧困山區的孩子們舉行一次捐贈活動．請給你的外教露西寫封郵件，希望她能參加，內容包括：
1．捐贈的時間和地點：2016年6月10日上午，校體育館；
2．捐贈的物品及意義等．
注意：
1．詞數100左右
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．結束語以為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
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Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封邀請函．寫作時，首先要寫清要點，包括：活動的背景，具體時間和地點，活動的內容和意義；其次要注意以第一人稱來表達；最后要注意時態以一般現在時態為主．
重點短語和句型：
live a hard life 生活困難
call on 號召
be willing to do sth 愿意做某事
make a difference 起作用，有影響
we do hope all of us will try our best to do something for them．
句中do位于謂語動詞前，強調謂語，是一個強調句．
we'll collect some clothes，books or even money in the gym，which will be sent to the poor areas later．
句中which引導非限制性定語從句．
not only will the children enjoy a happy life but also they'll have a good education．
句中not only…but also…連接并列句，not only位于句首時，句中要部分倒裝．

解答 Dear Lucy，
At present，there are many children in the poor areas still living a hard life．They don't have enough food to eat or clothes to wear．Furthermore，they can't afford to attend school．In order to call on everyone to help the poor children in the mountainous areas，we do hope all of us will try our best to do something for them．（高分句型一）（介紹活動背景）
 On the morning of June 10th，2016，we'll collect some clothes，books or even money in the gym，which will be sent to the poor areas later．（高分句型二）If you are willing to donate something to the poor children，do come to the gym in time．（說明活動內容和時間地點）
With your help，not only will the children enjoy a happy life but also they'll have a good education．（高分句型三）Meanwhile，you'll feel happy by making a difference．I hope you can take part in the activity．Thank you!（說明活動意義并發出邀請）
Yours
Li Hua

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態使用要正確．