Question

感恩，是我們生活中永恒的話題。學(xué)會(huì)感恩，學(xué)會(huì)熱愛生活，我們將會(huì)感受到更多快樂。假如你校擬舉行一次有關(guān)“感恩”的演講比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語演講稿。
要點(diǎn)：
1. 感恩對(duì)象（如：父母、老師、朋友……）；
2. 為何感恩；
3. 如何感恩；
注意：
只能選擇一個(gè)感恩對(duì)象；
可對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
演講稿中不得提及考生所在的學(xué)校師生或本人姓名；
詞數(shù)在130字左右；開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”                                                                          
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                             
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible student version: 
Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”
Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during the stressful days. In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother. 
Listen, time is pressing. The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughter, to realize dreams. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our mums. I have another message for everyone here; Express your love in return. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her and her face will light up. Thank you for listening.

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是要求學(xué)生寫“感恩”為話題的演講稿，是一篇典型的提綱作文，在寫作之前要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如be blessed with，keep sb. company，as … as possible，on top of that, cheer up，be fortunate to do，realize dreams， appeal to，light up；還運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯appreciate，unconditional等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：whenever等等。