Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國網友Henry對中國的太極拳(Tai Chi)很感興趣，來信向你詢問相關事宜。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：

1. 中國武術，以動作平衡著稱；

2. 有益于身體健康及精神放松；

3. 建議他學習太極拳。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：武術martial art

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

It is glad to know that you are interested in Tai Chi. I feel greatly honored to tell you something about it.

Tai Chi is an ancient Chinese martial art, which is famous for its well-balanced movements. In addition, what is widely acknowledged is that it functions as an effective health exercise. What’s more, not only can it make people physically healthy, but also it provides the mental relaxation, which is very necessary in our modern stressful lives.

Since you show great preference for it, I strongly recommend that you learn it. You will find yourself fitter and more energetic after learning it.

I am sure you will enjoy learning it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達要求寫一封信，屬于應用文，也是提綱類短文。

第1步：審題。根據提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；你的英國網友Henry對中國的太極拳(Tai Chi)很感興趣，來信向你詢問相關事宜。時態應為一般現在時。

第2步：確定要點。介紹與太極拳相關的知識：（1）中國武術，以動作平衡著稱；（2）有益于身體健康及精神放松；（3）建議他學習太極拳。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

范文分為四部分，顯得條理清楚。文章第一部分介紹Henry對中國的太極拳(Tai Chi)很感興趣，來信向你詢問相關事宜。第二部分與太極拳相關的知識，本部分中作者運用了較多的高級結構，如定語從句which is famous for its well-balanced movements.部分倒裝句not only can it make people physically healthy；同時作者還合理使用串聯詞，如in addition，what’s more等，這些串聯詞讓各要點成為了一個整體。