Question

請你仔細觀察圖片，寫一篇120字的短文。你的短文應包括下列要點：

1. 簡單敘述圖片中的內容；

2. 談談父母對你的期待；

3. 你的看法和對將來的打算。

注意： 1. 詞數120左右；

2. 可適當增加細節要點，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

As is shown in the picture above,                                                                  

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                         

                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As is shown in the picture above, different parents have different expectations of children. Some parents are rich but they don’t have much education. So they hope that their children can go to college to be well-educated. For some, things are just the opposite. They want their children to make money.

My parents, though they are poor, don’t wish me to make money at an early time. They say school education is vital for a poor family. Qualified education is the first wise choice, which later makes a promising future.

I’m completely for what my parents expect of me. I believe wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand. To live up to my parents’ dreams, I will make every effort to be a wise learner and a brave discoverer in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：本文文意新穎，寓意深刻。學生首先對圖片的內容進行簡單的陳述，如不同的父母親對孩子有不同的期望different parents have different expectations of children.分別對兩者截然相反的觀點進行說明，然后，結合自身的情況，談談自己父母對自己的期望，可以用They say school education is vital for a poor family.來表達或是運用have a far-reaching effect on這個句型來表達教育對自己有深遠的影響，最后說明自己的看法和打算，說明自己非常贊同父母的觀點，說明智慧比金錢更重要wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.自己將不遺余力的去實現自己的夢想make every effort to do sth.

考點：提綱類寫作

點評：本文的寫作是高考近幾年的趨勢，利用圖片的內容來表達觀點，此類文章首先需要對圖片內容進行介紹，然后根據要求寫作。注意對不會的表達進行替換，同時注意避免使用中式英文和硬譯。對于高中作文的寫作要注意多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩步的提升。