Question

第二節　書面表達（滿分25分）
隨著社會競爭日益激烈 ,父母忙于工作、無暇照顧孩子,從而選擇用金錢的方式獎勵孩子在學習上的進步。請你用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文, 簡要地分析產生這種現象的原因，著重談談你對此的看法。
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Answer 1

In modern times ，more and more parents devote their energy to their career due to fierce competition ，thus caring less about their children 。Many of them tend to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies。
However，I don't think this is a practical and proper way。Firstly ，if the children are always rewarded with money once getting high marks ，their attention will focus on money instead of the pleasure of studying 。More seriously ，study ，in their eyes，will become a trade rather than his own business ，which will attract harms but an advantage 。Secondly ，too much money will spoil the children ，for they are too young to make good use of it。I think a hug and a kiss will work better than money。

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