Question

10．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
       2．只允許修改10處，多著（從第11處起）不計分．
Last month we took a trip to Dalian because of my brother was getting married．When mom told me the news，she found that I wasn't exciting．So the next words out of her mouth was，"Besides go to the wedding，we would also be going to the Wild Animal Park"，I thought the wedding was boring，so it turned out to be very interesting．There was so many food and their choice in music was pleasant．I enjoy myself there and I really didn't want to leave．Back home that night I wrote thank-you note to my brother for the great time we have at her wedding．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了作者參加哥哥婚禮的過程．上個月我們去大連參加哥哥的婚禮，媽媽看我不感興趣，就說我們還會去野生動物園．我本認為婚禮很無聊，結果證明婚禮很有趣，食物美味，音樂優美，我都不想要離開了．回來后我給哥哥寫了感謝信．

解答 Last month we took a trip to Dalian because of my brother was getting married．When mom told me the news，she found that I wasn't exciting．So the next words out of her mouth was，"Besides go to the wedding，we would also be going to the Wild Animal Park"，I thought the wedding was boring，so it turned out to be very interesting．There was so many food and their choice in music was pleasant．I enjoy myself there and I really did't want to leave．Back home that night I wrote thank-you note to my brother for the great time we have at her wedding．
解析：
1、去掉of．引導從句my brother was getting married用連詞 because．
2、exciting-excited．考查單詞辨析．修飾主語I用excited，表示"興奮的"．
3、was-were．考查主謂一致關系．和主語 the next words呼應用were．
4、go-going．考查非謂語動詞．介詞Besides的賓語用動名詞doing，所以用going．
5、be going-go．考查謂語動詞．情態動詞would用動詞原形，所以用would go．
6、so-but．考查連詞．I thought the wedding was boring表示"我本認為婚禮很無聊"，it turned out to be very interesting表示"結果證明婚禮很有趣"，兩句之間是轉折關系，所以用but連接．
7、many-much．考查不可數名詞的修飾詞．修飾不可數名詞food用much．
8、enjoy-enjoyed．考查謂語動詞的時態．本文講述的是過去的事，所以謂語動詞用過去式enjoyed．
9、have-had．考查謂語動詞的時態．本文講述的是過去的事，所以謂語動詞用過去式had．
10、her-his．考查代詞．和my brother 呼應用his．

點評 考查短文改錯．
修飾不可數名詞的常用修飾語有this，that，little，a little，a bit of，much，a great deal of，a large amount of 等：
I have little time to do it．我沒什么時間來做此事．
He didn't give me much money．他沒給我很多錢．
A great deal of money is spent on research．研究工作上花了許多錢．