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陳若琳，1992年12月12日生于江蘇南通。4歲開始練習跳水。她克服困難，艱苦訓練。拼搏精神指引她成功，在2012年倫敦奧運會上獲得兩枚金牌。請你結合陳若琳的實例，并根據以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，談談你對拼搏精神的看法。

拼搏精神的意義	1．激勵我們直面困難；
	2．竭力實現目標，走向成功；
	……
如何培養拼搏精神	1．要堅信人人都有獲得成功的潛力；
	2．遇到挫折不氣餒，從失敗中學習；
	……

 
注意：1．對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯；
2．詞數150左右；
3．參考詞匯：拼搏精神 determination 培養  cultivate   挫折     setback

Answer 1

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Born in Nantong, Jiangsu Province on December 12, 1992, Chen Ruolin took up diving at the age of four. Since then, she has been training hard and overcoming whatever difficulty. She won two gold medals at the 2012 London Olympic Games. It is her great determination that has led her to success.
In my opinion, determination is very important in our lives. It encourages us to move forward, especially during our hard times. This quality enables us to face difficulty bravely and never run away from it. Thus we can stick to our goals and succeed eventually.
It is not easy to cultivate determination. Above all, we must hold a belief that everyone has the potential to achieve success. We shouldn’t be discouraged when faced with setbacks. Actually, failure can teach us a lot. What’s more, there are quite a few people with this spirit around us. We can learn a lot from them.

解析試題分析：1. 仔細審題。根據寫作任務，要求學生認真審讀提綱，領會意圖，捕捉信息，確定文章時態及體裁。2. 撰寫提綱。構思文章要點，寫出每個段落主題句、關鍵詞，然后確定細節和內容要點。3. 簡寫初稿。經過審題和列提綱后，開始寫作，有意識地使用固定句型、關聯詞，把段落按邏輯順序連成一體，形成基本連貫的初稿。復查是書面表達不可缺少的環節。要檢查（1）要點是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時態、語態、名詞單復數等有無錯誤。（4）用詞是否得當，有無習語及固定搭配等方面的錯誤。
考點：提綱作文。
點評：考生應該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。