Question

16．假如你是李華，你校將舉辦中學生文化藝術節，請給你的英國朋友Peter寫信，邀請他參加這次藝術節并請他表演一個節目．信的內容包括：
1．演出地點、時間及參加人員；
2．介紹藝術節主題：弘揚傳統文化，促進文化交流．
注意：1．詞數：100左右
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：中學生文化藝術節the Middle School Art Festival
承辦 host     弘揚 carry forward
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）Here comes a piece of good news appealing to you．The Middle School Art Festival hosted by our school is drawing near．
The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange．And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二）Next Friday，on the 30th of June，the festival will be held in the Shiyu Building．All of us students will take part in it．I sincerely hope that you can join us in our performance．By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）
All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your family．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是李華，你校將舉辦中學生文化藝術節，請給你的英國朋友Peter寫信，邀請他參加這次藝術節并請他表演一個節目，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：演出地點、時間及參加人員；介紹藝術節主題：弘揚傳統文化，促進文化交流．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：appeal to吸引；promote cultural exchange促進文化交流；take part in參加；By the way順便說一下；satisfy our curiosity滿足我們的好奇心
I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）
And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二）
By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       How is everything going？I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）Here comes a piece of good news appealing to you．The Middle School Art Festival hosted by our school is drawing near．
       The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange．And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二） Next Friday，on the 30th of June，the festival will be held in the Shiyu Building．All of us students will take part in it．I sincerely hope that you can join us in our performance．By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）
       All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your family．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．