Question

3．假定你是李華．前幾天，你在打籃球時傷了腳，目前正在住院．昨天，你的外籍教師Pete：前來探望，你非常感動．請用英語給Peter寫一封信表達謝意，并告訴他：
（1）非常喜歡他贈送的書籍；
（2）王明每天放學后，都來給你補課；
（3）兩周內就可康復出院．
注意：
（1）詞數100左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節．以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I'm writing here to express my sinceregratitude to you for coming to see me in hospital yesterday．I really like thebooks you have brought to me，and I think they will be very helpful in my Englishlearning．You needn't worry about the lessons during my absence from school，for my classmate Wang Ming said he would come after school every day to help memake up．
By theway，the doctor told me this morning that I could recover and go back toschool within two weeks．That's really good news for me．Then I will go andshow my thanks again．
Best wishes to you！．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料，寫一封信，感謝外籍教師Peter在你住院期間前來探望．寫作要點包括：非常喜歡他贈送的書籍；王明每天放學后，都來給你補課，兩周內就可康復出院．寫作時應以一般現在時和一般過去時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：express one's sincere gratitude to （表達真誠地感謝），worry about （擔心），during one'sabsence from school （某人缺課期間），make up（彌補），by the way （順便說）．

解答 Dear Peter，
     I'm writing here to express my sinceregratitude to you for coming to see me in hospital yesterday．I really like thebooks you have brought to me，and I think they will be very helpful in my Englishlearning．【高分句型】（非常喜歡他贈送的書籍） You needn't worry about thelessons during my absence from school，for my classmate Wang Ming said hewould come after school every day to help me make up．【高分句型】（王明每天放學后都會給你補課）
   By the way，the doctor told methis morning that I could recover and go back to school within two weeks．That'sreally good news for me．Then I will go and show my thanks again．（兩周內就可以康復出院）　
      Best wishes to you！

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．