Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄你參加冬奧會(huì)吉祥物征集活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：吉祥物 mascot

官方公眾號(hào) official account

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, I participated in a Winter Olympic Mascot Design Competition, which turned out to be an extremely rewarding experience.

On Monday morning, our school announced the event, requesting for innovative design proposals for the Beijing 2022 Olympic Mascot. It greatly sparked my interest and I made up my mind to have a try. Therefore, I devoted my spare time after school to my design. Drawing my inspiration from the elements of winter, I decided to take the snowman as the basic figure of the mascot. With details added to refine my design, I carefully painted the final version down, looking forward to showing it to my classmates.

After I unveiled my design enthusiastically to my classmates the next day, I was greeted with a big round of appreciative applause. A sense of achievement surged through me as my classmates all spoke highly of my design. They even encouraged me to submit it to the official account of the Beijing Organising Committee of the Winter Olympic 2022, which boosted my confidence. Then I uploaded my design to the official account after school. I swelled with pride regardless of the result, for I did my bit to be part of the Beijing 2022 Olympic.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容寫一篇英文周記。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇英文周記；假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄你參加冬奧會(huì)吉祥物征集活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程。人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)圖片，確定關(guān)鍵信息內(nèi)容：第一幅：“周一上午，我校宣布了本次活動(dòng)，征集北京2022年奧運(yùn)會(huì)吉祥物的創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì)方案”；第二幅：“從冬天的元素中獲得靈感，我決定以雪人作為吉祥物的基本形象。為了完善我的設(shè)計(jì)，我添加了很多細(xì)節(jié)，我仔細(xì)地把最終的版本畫下來(lái)，期待著展示給我的同學(xué)們。”第三幅：“第二天，當(dāng)我滿懷熱情地向同學(xué)們展示我的設(shè)計(jì)時(shí)，他們報(bào)以熱烈的掌聲。”第四幅：“放學(xué)后我把我的設(shè)計(jì)上傳到官方賬號(hào)。”

第3步：根據(jù)圖片關(guān)鍵信息進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。