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書面表達。

假定你叫李華，今年六月份將從北京新華中學高三畢業，打算到美國哥倫比亞大學上學。 現在請你根據下面表格的個人信息，用英語寫一封信，申請留學。 姓名：李華             性別：女  出生年月：1993年6月   畢業學校：北京新華中學 學業：各門功課優秀 申請院校：美國哥倫比亞大學 申請院校：美國哥倫比亞大學                                  興趣愛好：網絡和英語 電子郵箱：lihua93@sina.com 注意：1．信件必須包括以上內容，不能逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。           2．詞數：100左右。開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。           參考詞匯：哥倫比亞大學-the University of Columbia

Dear Sir or Madam,      I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________                                                                                                                          Yours sincerely,                                                                                                                           Li Hua

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Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your
university.
     First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I'm Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993.
I'm graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June. I'm an all-student with a keen interest
in computers and the Internet. Besides, I'm good at English. I know that the University of Columbia is
ranked among the most famous universities in the USA, and that's the very reason why I'm now applying
to further my university study in your Computer Science Department.
     I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me
the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@sina.com.
     Looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                                           Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                            Li Hua