Question

假定你是李華。在最近的一次班會上，你班同學們就“高三學生是否需要吃補品來保持健康”展開了討論。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息用英語寫一篇短文，并談一些你自己的看法，給某英語雜志投稿。

60％的同學認為	40％的同學認為
1．堅持鍛煉，無需吃任何補品(tonic)。	1．高三階段課業(yè)繁重，很多同學經(jīng)常感到疲勞。
2．過多攝人補品會增加體重，對健康不利。	2．補品可以幫助恢復精力。
3．價格比較貴。	3．沒時間鍛煉身體。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右。短文開頭已為你寫好，不計人詞數(shù)。

      2．內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。

I'm writing to tell about the discussion we've had in the recent class meeting about whether Senior 3 students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit.

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Answer 1

I'm writing to tell about the discussion we've had in the recent class meeting about whether Senior 3 students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit.

Opinions are divided on the topic. Sixty percent of the students think it unnecessary to take any tonics. They hold the opinion that taking tonics will cause them to put on weight, which is bad for their health. What's more, the price of tonics is rather high.

However, forty percent of the students point out that Senior 3 students have a lot more homework to do every day. So many students get tired and tonics can help to refresh themselves. 

解析:

文章行文力爭自然流暢，文章要點齊全，意思表達真切。詳略得當，重點突出。從語言使用的角度來說，要使用一些生動的動詞，準確的名詞，同時為了使本文串聯(lián)自然，可以使用時間狀語為連接詞，將文章按照時間順序敘述完整。