Question

假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上，你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。

I’m the mother of a sixteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school，but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

寫作要點：

1．表明自己的看法；

2．陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；

3．提出至少兩條建議。

要求：

1．短文須寫在指定區域。

2．短文詞數不少于100(不含已寫好的部分)。

3．內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫。

4．書寫須清晰、工整。

Hi，TigerMom，

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.

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Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi，TigerMom，

What_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_many_parents_in_China.  In my opinion, what you think and what you do are not suitable.

Although high grades are important in assessing students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some top  students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they are expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Besides，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly，let her live like a lovely girl；let her have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

【解析】本文是關于現在非常流行的一種教育方法：虎媽。很多人對這樣的教育方法有不同的看。我們在寫作的過程中要注意使用高級詞匯，高級句型，和合適的連接詞如besides，會讓文章更流暢。