Question

假如有一批澳大利亞中學生在京旅游，住在北京飯店，請用英語為他們擬一個參觀頤和園的口頭通知, 內容要點如下:
1．參觀時間: 10月15日，星期三
2．頤和園簡介: 它是中國最大的保存最完好的皇家(royal)園林, 風景優美, 甚是迷人, 有山有水, 有皇家建筑和畫廊。
3．活動安排: 上午自由參觀, 中午在快餐館吃午飯, 下午5:30返回賓館。
4．集合時間: 星期三早上6:10, 汽車6:30開, 行駛45分鐘。
5．集合地點: 賓館大門口。
要求: 不要逐條翻譯, 詞數100詞左右 。注意通知格式。
Boys and girls,
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Answer 1

Boys and girls,
May I have your attention? I have an announcement to make.
We will visit the summer Palace on Wednesday, October 15. The Summer Palace is the largest well-kept royal park in China. In the park there is water and man-piled hills. There are some royal buildings and a gallery, too. I am sure you will be struck by its beautiful scenery. In the morning we will be free to visit the different places of the Palace and then we will have lunch in the fast-food restaurant. We will get back to the hotel at half five. Please gather at the hotel gate at 6:10 on Wednesday morning. The buses will start at 6:30. It will take us about 45 minutes to get there. Please be on time. Thank you.

試題分析：這篇作文是口頭通知，要點是以提綱形式出現的，包括簡介，時間地點和安排，要點要覆蓋全，為了文章連貫也可以適當增加細節。還有就是時態的問題，應該是一般將來時，還有通知中有地點，時間，注意英語的表達法，因為是口頭通知，可以用寫簡潔的句子，不要太復雜，要點交代清楚就行。
點評：口頭通知是常見的寫作形式，注意寫作格式，正文的寫作套路，還有時態，句子的簡潔。