Question

假如你是李華，在十一旅游期間入住北京友誼賓館301房向，10月2日入住，6日退房。你回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)中等大小的藍(lán)色背包遺失在那里，內(nèi)有幾本參考書(shū)籍，一個(gè)白色限量版iPod，一張信用卡和少量現(xiàn)金。請(qǐng)用英文給該賓館外籍經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)他幫忙尋找并寄回。
信件要點(diǎn)包括：
1．陳述寫(xiě)信原因；   2．簡(jiǎn)要描述該背包；
3．說(shuō)明其重要性；   4．期待回復(fù)并感謝。   
注意：
1．150詞左右；
2．信件格式已給出。
Dear Sir,
                                                                                      
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour, but I’m writing to ask a favor to find and sent back my pack which I left in your hotel.
I checked in on Oct, 2 and out on Oct, 6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 301. It’s a medium-sized, blue, leather backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a white iPod of special edition, a credit card and some cash. All in the pack matter to me, especially the iPod, a precious gift from my father on my 18^th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.
If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本文的要點(diǎn)要考生自己稍加補(bǔ)充。具體可在重要性方面加強(qiáng)說(shuō)明,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。