Question

短文改錯

Dear Li Hua,
I have arrived in America for two months, and I	(1)______
have found school dances in American high schools were very	(2)______
popular. At my school, dances took place in the school	(3)______
gym, which floor is made of wood, so that students	(4)______
must dance in his socks. That is why a “socks hop”	(5)______
is a more popular name in a school dance. Every	(6)______
new school term, the school will organize evening socks hop.	(7)______
Some students sell soft drinks, hot dogs and other	(8)______
things to raise money, which go towards buying new	(9)______
school equipment. Isn't this interesting? Let's keep in touch.	(10)______

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

(1) arrived→been arrive 為短暫性動詞，不能與一段時間狀語連用. (2) were→are 此句說明現狀，而非過去.因此要用一般現在時. (3) took→take 應用一般現在時態. (4) which→whose whose此處代替the gym's，在定語從句中作定語修飾floor, which 無此用法. (5) his→their 主語students是復數，所以用their與之保持一致. (6) in→for for意為“適合于……” (7) evening 前加an hop是單數可數名詞，前面用 an表示“種類”. (8) √ (9) go→goes which 此處代替不可數名詞 money，謂語動詞go應改為第三人稱單數以和先行詞money保持一致. (10) this→that that 指剛提到的以上的事情.