Question

短文改錯[2015 •陜西渭南教學(xué)質(zhì)檢]

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

One day I happens to find a chatting room on my QQ,there people were chatting in English.  I tried chat with some of them. To my surprised,I found the oral English,of some junior students was better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many use?ful words and expressions. With time go by,I found that I could even communicate with some college students freely.

Answer 1

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