Question

9．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在下面寫出增加的詞；
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉；
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分．
Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．In the past two and a half years，our school had organized many activities．What impressed me best was an activity called"Learning to Farm"．In an autumn afternoon，we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes．Having been in the city for so a long time，we were so happy to go to the countryside．After divided into three groups，we started to work．Some students cut potatoes into pieces； some dug holes，and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole，put the earth back and pushed them down hard．We continued doing that until all the work was done．Although we were exhausted，but we felt fulfilled on our way back home．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文講述了自己在學校印象最深刻的一次活動，在這次活動中作者和同學們學習種土豆．同學們被分成三組，有的切土豆，有的挖坑，還有的埋土豆．作者和同學們一直干完，盡管很累，但非常滿足．

解答 Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．
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In the past two and a half years，our school had organized
                                                                 has     
many activities．What impressed me best was an activity called
                                                      most
"Learning to Farm"．In an autumn afternoon，we were sent to a
                              On
farm whichwe learned to plant potatoes．Having been in the city
       where
for so a long time，we were so happy to go to the countryside．

After∧divided into three groups，we started to work．Some students
       being
cut potatoes into pieces； some dug holes，and the others put the

pieces of potatoes into the hole，put the earth back and pushed them
                                       holes                                                 it
down hard．We continued doing that until all the work was done．

Although we were exhausted，but we felt fulfilled on our way back home．
                                          去掉but
1．a改為the；考查冠詞，序數詞third前面要加定冠詞the．
2．had 改為has；考查動詞的時態，根據時間狀語  In the past two and a half years可知，此處應用現在完成時．
3．best 改為most；考查副詞，結合上下文分析句意為"使我印象最深的是學習干農活"，故用副詞much的最高級most．
4．In 改為On；考查介詞，具體到在某一天的上文或下午 時要用介詞on．
5．which改為where；考查定語從句，分析句子結構可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞為a farm，所以用關系副詞where引導．
6．so 改為such；so為副詞，修飾形容詞或副詞，such為形容詞，修飾名詞，這里a long time是名詞性短語，故用such．
7．divided前加being；考查動詞的語態，分析句子結構，暗含主語是"we"，與動詞divide是被動關系，所以divided的前面加being，表示被動．
8．hole 改為holes；考查名詞；結合上下文分析，有的同學把切開的土豆放進挖的坑里面，前面的hole用了復數形式，這里也應該用復數形式．
9．them改為it；考查代詞，這里需要指代的是 the earth，為不可數名詞，故用it．
10．去掉but；考查連詞，although不能與but連用，故去掉but．

點評 短文改錯當中，首先要從整體掌握短文大意，結合上下文語境并充分運用平時掌握的基礎知識，習慣用法，短語搭配等對短文進行分析，以便找出文中的錯誤所在，并加以修正．