Question

有些高中生有時(shí)與同學(xué)發(fā)生這樣或那樣的矛盾或沖突，這些問(wèn)題會(huì)給大家?guī)��?lái)煩惱甚至影響大家的學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120詞左右的短文，分析一下產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因，并談?wù)剳?yīng)如何正確地與同學(xué)相處。（關(guān)鍵詞：classmate conflicts）

                                                                   

                                                                   

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Classmate conflicts among senior middle school students are often heard on campus over recent years. These conflicts make the excitement of campus life grow grey and have bad effects on both their living and learning. Classmate conflicts often rise from daily tiny things such as space where to store books or notes.

When personalities don’t mix the specifics can tear classmates apart and sometimes even lead to serious conflicts. Besides the fact that classmates hold different attitudes towards certain issues is another factor causing these conflicts.

Classmate conflicts are harmful and need to be settled. Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. Meanwhile communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts result from misunderstanding

【解析】

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放式作文，考生在寫作時(shí)要注意根據(jù)英文提示，切忌偏題，短文主要談的是“同學(xué)間的矛盾問(wèn)題”，描述自己的飲食習(xí)慣，要求分析一下產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因，并談?wù)剳?yīng)如何正確地與同學(xué)相處。考生要緊緊抓住這些特點(diǎn)，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，適當(dāng)展開(kāi)自己的想象。，開(kāi)放式作文難就難在沒(méi)有要點(diǎn)，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地大，但也增加了難度，有的考生會(huì)覺(jué)得無(wú)話可說(shuō)，這時(shí)可以充分利用所給的信息，展開(kāi)陳述，但要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，句式選擇要富有變化。在寫作的過(guò)程中注意句型的多樣化和連接詞的使用。要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 Classmate conflicts often rise from daily tiny things such as space where to store books or notes. 這句話用的是疑問(wèn)詞+不定式做定語(yǔ)， the fact that classmates hold different attitudes towards certain issues is another factor causing these conflicts. 這句話是用同位語(yǔ)從句， Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. 這句話是個(gè)復(fù)雜句：里面有讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句，動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)， communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts result from misunderstanding 還有Meanwhile和 Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞也要經(jīng)常使用。

考點(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式作文