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假如你是校報編輯．請根據下面的“姚明小檔案”寫一篇英語文章．簡單介紹姚明的基本情況。
姚明小檔案
位置：中鋒    國籍：中國   籍貫：上海    生日：9／12／80
高度：2．26M               體重：134．3kg
父母都是籃球運動員。4歲生日時，他得到了第一個籃球。6歲時知道NBA。
9歲開始接受業余訓練，17歲入選國家青年隊；18歲穿上了中國隊服。
2000年奧運會期間，姚明平均每場63．9％的投籃命中率無人能比；在2001年的亞洲籃球錦標賽上。姚明以平 均每場13．4分的成績幫助中國國家隊奪得冠軍。
2002年6月被休斯頓火箭隊選中，成為一名非常有前途的馳騁于NBA賽場的中國中鋒。
注意：1．詞數120左右。
生詞：亞洲籃球錦標賽：Asian Basketball Tournament
投籃命中率：field goal percentage
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Answer 1

Yao Ming, now 2.26m in height and 134.34 kg in weight, was born in Shanghai, China on September 12, 1980, whose parents were both basketball players. He got the first basketball as his fourth birthday present, and he knew about NBA at the age of 6. Yao Ming began to receive basketball training when he was 9, and he was admitted to National Youth Basketball Team of China at 17. The following year saw him wearing our national team’s uniform.
At the 2000 Olympics, Yao Ming ranked first in field goal percentage (63.9%). And during the 2000 Asian Basketball Tournament, Yao helped China get the title with an average 13.4 points per game.
In June, 2002, Yao Ming was chosen by the Houston Rockets and since then he has been fighting in NBA basketball fields as a promising Chinese centre.

試題分析：這是提綱類短文，根據要點簡單介紹姚明的基本情況。文章的要點基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時候也不能逐字逐句的翻譯，要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯起來，形成一個整體。選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。如：Yao Ming, now 2.26m in height and 134.34 kg in weight, was born in Shanghai, China on September 12, 1980, whose parents were both basketball players.和Yao Ming began to receive basketball training when he was 9, and he was admitted to National Youth Basketball Team of China at 17.都是很好的句式。寫這篇作文的時候特別注意時間的表達。
點評：提綱類作文的關鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。但是一定要地道的英語表達法，在寫作的時候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。不要過分堆砌。