Question

最近你班將舉行一場(chǎng)題為 Life in the future 的討論會(huì)， 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)， 寫一篇一百詞左右的短文。
1. 隨著醫(yī)學(xué)的發(fā)展，人類的平均壽命將會(huì)達(dá)到120歲。
2. 由于新能源的出現(xiàn)，污染問題將得到控制。
3. 人們的日常生活也將有很大的變化。 如機(jī)器人可以為你做家務(wù)；椅子的顏色能夠隨著你所穿的衣服而改變；手機(jī)可以帶在手腕上， 通話時(shí)可以看到對(duì)方；可以乘坐新型的電梯進(jìn)入太空度假。（手腕 wrist  電梯 elevator）
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

As time goes on, life in the future will be very different from that of today.
First, with the development of medicine, people will live to the age of 120 or so on the average. Second, because of the discovery of new energy, the environmental pollution will be under control. Third, people’s daily life will change greatly, as well. For example, robots will do all your housework for you; your chair will change its color to match what you’re wearing; you can also put your mobile phone around your wrist and can see the caller while talking; you can even take a new type of elevator into space for your holidays.
In a word, we are looking forward to an exactly new world in the future.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)討論會(huì)的結(jié)果寫一篇短文。寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)列出，但不能簡(jiǎn)單的照著翻譯，應(yīng)該有所展開，多使用高級(jí)詞匯和重要句型以及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，像定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、倒裝等。另外，注意人、時(shí)態(tài)、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了較多的短語(yǔ)As time goes on, different from, with the development of medicine,on the average, because of, under control, as well, For example, In a word, looking forward to等，使作文內(nèi)容充實(shí)，增強(qiáng)了作文的豐富性；范文使用了First, Second, Third來進(jìn)行列舉，條理分明；范文還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句what you’re wearing；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞while talking。