Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該增加的詞。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正的詞。
注意：1. 原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Mr. Li is a well-known doctor in our city. Kind but patient, he is always ready to do what he can help his patients. One day he learned from the medical magazine that patients will feel more pain if pleasant music is played to them. Soon he got an office in his own. So he decided to have beautifully music playing in his waiting-room. However, on one morning, an old lady who was sitting in the crowded waiting room became angry while listen to the music. She said, “We were all waiting to see the doctor, but he’s just playing the violin in his office instead of doing her work.”

Answer 1

1. …Kind but patient…            but改成and   
2. …can help his…                  can 后加to
3. …from the medical magazine       the 改成a
4. … feel more pain                 more 改成 less
5. … in his own…                   in 改成 of
6. …h(huán)ave beautifully music…        beautifully 改成 beautiful
7. …on one morning                 去掉 on
8. …while listen to..               listen 改成 listening
9. …We were all waiting…           were 改成 are
10. … doing her work                her改成 his

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