Question

請你根據下列提示，并結合你校園生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

The power of praise is great. Praise can help people build their confidence and go through ups and downs.

注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

④詞數為120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

From my point of view, with praise from others, we will overcome any obstacles on the way to success.

Few months ago, I was depressed because of my failure in a series of tests. Therefore, absorbed in my negative mood, I didn’t pay much attention to study. My teacher found my abnormal behavior and had a talk with me. I had thought he would criticize me, but he didn’t. He just said, “You are such a clever and hardworking boy. I believe you won’t let people around you down.” It was his praise that inspired me with confidence and made me realized that I shouldn’t give up. From then on, I studied harder than before and got good marks at length.

Praise is the best virtue. Only with praise can we have the confidence to defeat problems and move forward.

【解析】

試題分析：本文寫作的話題是表揚的力量。接受了別人的表揚，可以讓我們有信心來克服生活指的困難，走向成功。考生可以用自己生活中的具體的事例來證明這個觀點的正確性，既可以是自己的例子也可以是身邊人的例子。要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。

考點：考察開放性短文寫作

點評：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。