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第二節：寫作：(25分)
假如你是李華，最近收到一封英國筆友Tom的來信。他希望了解你校如何維護學生在校期間的安全。請你寫一封英語回信，介紹你校的做法，如重視安全問題、加強安全教育、增加保安人員、來訪示證登記等。(信的開頭結尾已給出)
注意：詞數：l00左右(信的開頭和結尾不計入總數)。信的內容可適當發揮。
參考詞匯：安全意識awareness of safety 登記register(vi)   保安security guard
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We believe a safe school will provide us students a better learning environment.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.
So far many measures have been taken to ensure the students' security in and of our school. The security issue has been emphasized on. We have organized several theme school meetings to strengthen the students' awareness of safety. The students have been taught the ways to protect ourselves from danger. For example, once we smell s9mething unusual, we should report it to the school guard immediately. At the same time, stricter security measures have been taken by our school, including a requirement that all visitors provide identification and register. Besides, a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school.
We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment
Yours,
Li Hua

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