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第二節(jié)：寫(xiě)作：（滿(mǎn)分25分）
國(guó)內(nèi)某家英文報(bào)紙?jiān)O(shè)有一個(gè)求助信箱（letters to Dr Helper）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)一份學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀中列出的部分信息，以高三學(xué)生王勇的名義，用英語(yǔ)給Dr Helper寫(xiě)一封短信。
學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀：
1．每日在校時(shí)間9小時(shí)；
2．每日作業(yè)時(shí)間3-4小時(shí)；
3．每日課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間幾乎沒(méi)有；
4．每日睡眠時(shí)間不足；
負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重原因：
考試壓力大，作業(yè)多，家長(zhǎng)期望高。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入要求的詞數(shù)。
生詞：負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重overload 壓力 pressure 期望 expectations 
Dear Dr Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong

Answer 1

Dear Dr Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home . We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves,but we hardly have any time to do what we want. Besides ,we even don’t have enough sleep .
There seems to be three causes about the overload ;the pressure of examinations ,too much homework and the high expectations from the parents . We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.
I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward
to your advice.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong

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