Question

高中學校生涯即將結束時，你校高三年級擬舉行一次有關“感恩”的英文演講比賽。請根據以下要點寫一篇120詞左右的演講稿。
要點：1.感恩對象;   2.為何感恩;  3.如何用實際行動表達自己的感恩之情。注意 1.只能選擇一個感恩
的對象，如家人、老師、朋友等。
2.可給所給要點作適當發揮；
3.演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名；
4.開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。
Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic my speech is “Thank you       .”
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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum.”
Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during these stressful days. In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and make my room as cozy as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother.
Listen, time is clicking. The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughter, to realize dreams. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our dear mums. I have another message for everyone here: Express your love in return. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her will shine her through.
Thank you for listening.

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