Question

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽，請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；
2.騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）;節(jié)能（energy saving）
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；
2. 演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning, everyone.
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                       
Thank you!

Answer 1

One Possible Version
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off  waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

試題分析：演講稿主題部分應(yīng)該闡述清楚事情的緣由、結(jié)果和要求。第一部分的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該以詳細(xì)完整地介紹事情為主，具體地講，包括事情的發(fā)生、發(fā)展及結(jié)局。第二部分的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該提出個人看法等。演講稿以簡單句為主要的表達(dá)形式。同時，演講稿的語言必須有感染力，所以演講稿可以使用祈使句、感嘆句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句等句式來達(dá)到這種目的。寫作時要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語言環(huán)境。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport,還運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如： As far as I’m concerned；For one thing…For another, What’s more等等。
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