Question

1．春節是我們的傳統節日．請以"春節"為話題，用英語寫一篇短文．文章 內容要點如下：
1．春節的重要性；
2．離家在外的人們對回家團聚的熱情；
3．春節期間的交通狀況；
4．你對春節的感受以及你打算怎樣過春節．
注意：
1．詞數：120左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
4．文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
As is well-known to everybody，the Spring Festival isChinese New Year，the most important traditional Chinese festival，which isa good chance to strengthen ties between family members and friends，or even business parents．
Early before the festival，people away from home will plan togo home for the festival．However busy or far away from home，they will try toget home for the Reunion dinner．Thus，there are traffic jams everywhere，as so many people are crowding on the way．
Personally，I don't care much about the festival，which isjust a matter of waste．However，I will put aside my books on New Year's Eveand share a big meal with my family．Enjoying the TV entertainment calledChunwan．In the next days I'll concentrate on learning．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料信息，以"春節"為題，寫一篇有關我們傳統節日的短文．寫作要點包括：1．春節的重要性； 2．離家在外的人們對回家團聚的熱情； 3．春節期間的交通狀況；4．你對春節的感受以及你打算怎樣過春節． 寫作時應以一般現在時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：As is well-known to sb （眾所周知），a good chance to do sth （做某事的好機會），try to do sth（努力做某事），traffic jams （交通堵塞），care about …（關心…），put aside sth （把某事放一邊），share sth with sb （與某人分享某物），concentrate on…（集中在…）．

解答 As is well-known to everybody，the Spring Festivalis Chinese New Year，the most important traditional Chinese festival，which isa good chance to strengthen ties between family members and friends，or evenbusiness parents．【高分句型】（春節的重要性）
Early before the festival，people away from home will plan togo home for the festival．However busy or far away from home，they will try toget home for the Reunion dinner．【高分句型】（離家在外的人們對回家團聚的熱情）Thus，there are traffic jams everywhere，as somany people are crowding on the way．（春節期間的交通狀況）
Personally，I don't care much about the festival，which isjust a matter of waste．However，I will put aside my books on New Year's Eveand share a big meal with my family．Enjoying the TV entertainment calledChunwan．In the next days I'll concentrate on learning．（對春節的感受以及打算怎樣過春節）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．