Question

書面表達（共15分）

根據圖畫內容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter” 為題，用英語寫一篇120-150詞左右的短文。短文須包括以下要點，不得逐條翻譯。

1、簡單描述漫畫的內容；

2、作業負擔過重；

3、精講精練；

4、參加體育鍛煉和社會活動。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter

The picture shows______________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter

The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and that a woman is doing some exercise. The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will lose some weight.”

As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we can do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

We do hope that our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more free time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all healthier mentally and physically.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，做題時：1. 認真讀圖，可知圖畫體現了學習過程中作業負擔過重的問題，2. 初步構思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內容。4. 反復審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關的時間、地點、人物等相關的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。

考點：看圖寫作

點評：在把握了文章的中心后，應在內心構思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當的詞語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內容。這是體現自身能力的重要一環。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當的連接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現跳躍現象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。