Question

假定你是李華，準備參加學校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語作文比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文，主要內容包括：

1 樂觀的人生態度

2 努力學習

3 參加體育鍛煉

關鍵詞：態度 attitude 樂觀的 positive

                                                                                   

                                                                                      

                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.We should be brove in front of difficulties.secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running ,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】

試題分析：本文較為簡單，是關于健康成長的短文，要點很簡單，留給考生發揮的余地較大，考生可以根據自己的個人感受做適當的發揮。在寫作的時候，要使用合適的連接詞firstly, secondly來連接全文。也要使用高級的詞匯如consist of等提高文章的文采。

考點：考查半開放性作文

點評：本文的話題較為簡單，要求也不高。考生可以從心理和生理的健康發展兩個方面著手，培養樂觀的人生態度，參加體育鍛煉，增強體質。在寫作的時候要運用多種句型讓文章充滿變化，提升文章的層次。