Question

寫作（25分）

假設你是新華中學的學生張華,班里從外地轉來一名同學李明,他一時無法融入新的班集體中,感到很苦惱。請根據下列要點用英語給他寫一封信:

1. 幫他分析原因

2. 給他提出建議

3. 陳述你幫助他的具體打算

Dear Li Ming,

I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class.__________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. Therefore it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally.

I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. To start with, you may as well learn to speak Putonghua, well understood by all the Chinese. Besides, comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.

In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you. I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.

Best regards,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。要求用英文根據下列要點用英語給從外地轉來一名同學李明寫一封信。要點都已經給出，信件要點包括：幫他分析原因，給他提出建議，陳述你幫助他的具體打算，審題時注意時態的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。象范文的One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates.使用了表語從句，還有comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.用了動名詞做主語。還要用適當的連接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫Therefore ，Besides等。

考點：考查書信類短文寫作。

點評：書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。