Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，是一名高三學(xué)生。你的英國朋友Tom因?yàn)楣ぷ髅�沒有看奧運(yùn)比賽，所以發(fā)e-mail向你了解劉翔因腳傷退賽的相關(guān)信息。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文給Tom回一封電子郵件。

要點(diǎn)：

1．2008年8月18日劉翔因腳傷退賽；

2．你深感惋惜；

3．表示將繼續(xù)支持劉翔；

4．祝愿劉翔早日傷愈，重返賽場。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)你所寫詞數(shù)）。

Dear Tom,

You said in your e-mail that you didn’t watch the Olympic Games because of your busy work and wanted to know something about Liu Xiang’s quitting the men’s 110-meter hurdles…

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

You said in your e-mail that you didn’t watch the Olympic Games because of your busy work and wanted to know something about Liu Xiang’s quitting the men’s 110-meter hurdles.    

August 18th should have been the most exciting day in 2008. However, it has been the saddest and most astonishing day. It was a great pity that LiuXiang got out of the match. At that moment, the whole world was shocked. LiuXiang cried. Because of the injured foot, he missed the most important match in his life.

However, we must support Liu Xiang. He is such a great hero to so many people around the world. I pray that he feels and senses the great respect that millions of people worldwide feel for him. I sincerely hope that he’ll recover and come back again. I am in firm belief that he will be the hero forever, at least in my heart!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

解析:

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