Question

8．假設你是濟寧一中高三學生李華，最近收到高一時的外教Angel女士的電子郵件，詢問你及學校的情況．請根據以下要點，用英語寫一封回信，主要介紹你及你校的變化：
1．你的情況：正備戰高考，忙且累，但不乏快樂；
2．學校情況：已遷入現代化新校區（campus），環境優美，多數同學住校．
注意：
1．詞數：120-150；
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：高考the National College Entrance Examination 住校live on campus．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料信息，寫一封電子郵件．向高一時的外教Angel女士介紹自己的情況及學校的變化．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態以一般現在時為主．
寫作要點：1．介紹自己的情況； 2．介紹學校的變化．
重要短語：hear from （收到…的來信），take place （發生），be busy doing sth （忙于做某事），prepare for （準備），enjoy oneself（玩得開心），as to （關于），be equipped with …（裝備，配備），highly-advanced facilities（先進的設施），choose to do sth （選擇做某物），be far from （遠離…），be located in（位于…）．
【高分句型】
1．About ten times the size of the old campus，the new school has modern buildings equipped with highly-advanced facilities．
此句中有倍數關系的表達法，結構為"A+be+多少倍+the+size+of+B"．
過去分詞短語"equipped with"作"buildings"的后置定語，固定短語"sth be equipped with …裝備，配備"．
2．Located nearby a lake and away from the downtown area，it is a nice place to live and study．
這里是由過去分詞短語作原因狀語，主句為"it is a nice place to live and study"，主句的主語為"it"，固定短語"sth be located+地點   位于…"．

解答 Dear Angel，
     Thanks for your email and it's so nice to hearfrom you．     Some majorchanges have taken place both in my life and to my school．I'm now in Senior Grade 3，busy preparing for theNational College Entrance Examination．Although much more tired every day than we were in Grade 1，my friends and I can stillfind time to enjoy ourselves．（介紹自己的情況）
As to the school，we moved to a newly-builtcampus only last year．About ten times the size of the old campus，the new school has modern buildings equipped withhighly-advanced facilities．【高分句型】Located nearby a lake andaway from the downtown area，it is a nice place to live and study．【高分句型】As the school is a bit far from home，most of the students chooseto live on campus．（介紹學校的變化）
I hope someday you'll come again and visit our school．You'll love it!
Your friend'
 Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．