Question

愛是人類普遍而偉大的感情，請以“l(fā)ove”為題，寫一篇100單詞左右的英語小短文。文章每一段的前一句話已經(jīng)給出。

　　Love plays an important part in this world today.

　　The love between you and your parents is a specials love.

　　There are other kinds of love.

Answer 1

Love

　　Love plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society, relationship between people are becoming looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concern for, and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life.

　　The love between you and your parents is a special one. This love, as any other sincere love, must be honest and be shared by both parents and children. The love of parents is a great support in their children’s lives. It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure.

　　There are other kinds of love. Love between friends, partners, human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives, even though we may not have the chance to think about it, it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.

解析:

解析：文章應(yīng)自然流暢, 要點明確，語法正確, 段落清晰。

解題方法：

(1）審題。明確大范圍的要求。高考的書面表達(dá)題材多，有的是文字背景材料提供要點，有的看圖作文或者圖表材料作文，還有兩者相結(jié)合的。各種提示材料都要仔細(xì)閱讀，審題必須到邊到位。

(2) 立題。明確主題是什么，突出要點的主體性地位，做好內(nèi)容上必要的刪減。

(3) 豐題。就提供的信息進(jìn)行語言上的組織，作適當(dāng)?shù)木唧w的補充。通過細(xì)致準(zhǔn)取得語言運用來補“血”補“肉”，使所要寫出來的文章意思連貫，語言暢通，邏輯嚴(yán)密。此過程的語言加工主要是做到：主謂一致和動詞的時態(tài)語態(tài)正確運用；體現(xiàn)連接詞在復(fù)合句中的使用；遞進(jìn)，并列，轉(zhuǎn)折等等副詞（短語）運用使語言連貫，表達(dá)清楚；新課標(biāo)高級詞匯運用給文章添彩添色；開放式作文適當(dāng)展開合理聯(lián)想；正確拼寫，書寫美觀大方。

(4) 查題。查信息點是否完整，有沒有遺漏。查語法是否正確，詞法方面主要檢查拼寫，冠詞、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)和詞語搭配等。句法方面主要檢查是否正確使用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、一些連接詞，過渡詞等。