Question

請你根據以下提, Never be afraid of making mistakes. In fact, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes are where success lies.并結合自己生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

注意：1．無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；?

2．除詩歌外，文體不限；

3．文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

4．詞數為120左右。

注意：文章首句已給出。

Mistakes are unavoidable in life.___________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.

I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always keep silent in the oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. Whenever I make mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could avoid them in the future. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I built up my confidence and now I can talk fluently in English, just as the saying goes, mistakes are where success lies. We just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes.

? So don’t be afraid of making mistakes, learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子： make a difference有影響，有差別，. At the beginning一開始,

keep silent保持沉默， avoid making mistakes. 避免犯錯，be afraid of害怕， He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. 這句話用了賓語從句，Whenever I make mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could avoid them in the future.這句話用了讓步狀語從句， With time going by, I built up my confidence and now I can talk fluently in English, just as the saying goes, mistakes are where success lies. 這句話用了with復合結構， Practice makes perfect. 和mistakes are where success lies.這兩句是諺語，用在這里很恰當。

考點：考查開放式書面表達